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ELA

Performance Task

6-3  final 

 

 

 

 

Standard(s):

E2a    The student produces a report that:

E2a.1  engages the reader by establishing a context, creating a persona, and otherwise developing reader interest

E2a.2  develops a controlling idea that conveys a perspective on the subject

E2a.3  creates an organizing structure appropriate to a specific purpose, audience and context

E2a.4  includes appropriate facts and details

E2a 6  uses a range of appropriate strategies, such as providing facts and details, describing or analyzing the subject, and narrating a relevant anecdote

E2a.7  provides a sense of closure to the writing

E4a  The student demonstrates a basic understanding of the rules of the English language in written and oral work, and selects the structures and features of language appropriate to the purpose, audience and context of the work.  The student demonstrates control of:

E4a.1  grammar

E4a.2  paragraph structure

E4a.3  punctuation

E4a.4  sentence construction

E4a.5  spelling

E4a.6  usage

 

The Task:

     Throughout history, people have left behind pieces of their civilization that tell us about their way of life.  You and your classmates have decided to prepare a time capsule that will be opened by students who attend your school fifty years from now.  The time capsule should contain information about the activities, events, trends and objects currently popular.

    

     Your job is to write to the students who will open the capsule in fifty years.  Since the times will inevitably change, you have to specifically describe the objects in the time capsule so that the students in the future have a clear picture of what your life is like at this time.

 

     You’ll complete the writing over a three-day period.  You can brainstorm ideas with your classmates on day one by jotting down notes, creating lists, drawing a mind map, or using another graphic organizer to help you generate and organize your thoughts.  You’ll write a draft on your own the second day, and will complete a final copy on day three.  Your final copy should be well organized and free of spelling and grammatical errors.

 

Note:  For submission to DoDEA for written commentary on student work, submit the draft and final copy.

 

Circumstances of Performance

The student work is produced under the following conditions:

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alone

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in a group

 

 

 

 

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in class

 

as homework

 

 

 

 

 

with teacher feedback

 

with peer feedback

 

 

 

 

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timed

 

extended project

 

 

 

 

 

no opportunity for revision

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opportunity for revision

 

Criteria for Success:  (the student)

·        Develops reader interest by establishing a context and/or creating a persona

·        Develops the idea of what life is like for today’s sixth graders

·        Creates a structure that addresses students who live fifty years from now

·        Includes appropriate facts and details to describe the objects

·        Uses a range of strategies, such as providing facts and details, describing current times and objects, narrating a relevant anecdotes, and comparing and contrasting

·        Includes a sense of closure to the writing

·        Edits work and demonstrates control of the rules of the English language in the final copy

 

Related Standard(s):  None